breakfast
August 14, 2006a sun crawls out of his hideout
and stretches his rays with a foggy yawn
his forehead clouded
he twists and turns
on the laps of his mountain mistress
a sun alights itself
between the tips of my fingers
hot clouds arise to surround the red glow
flavour
the perfect welcome to my daybreak
a dog awakens on the sidewalk
and howls goodmorning to me
hello, i reply
i’m not as hungry as he
i am pretty pleased
with my nicotine breakfast

observations eh
pretty cool ones
nicotine breakfast…hmmmm
Comment by ayerhs — August 14, 2006 @ 5:34 am
I think I’ll follow your footpath soon. Nicotine breakfast sounds rather delicious….
I say nice use of words. Adjectives especially.
Comment by Dhriti — August 14, 2006 @ 6:08 pm